Looks ok, easy to read, but I agree, it does look a little off the shelf "gloggy". Heck that's a darn good description. If you run with this, you should make sure content is very interesting / unique / important / fun, or whatever you are after.
If you are into redneck fun... check out the video on this blog...
http://www.misscellania.com/miss-cellania/2006/8/23/computer-trap-shoot.html